haodi3332015 发表于 2012-7-25 11:10   全显示 1楼
还可以,就是太短了,性爱场面太单一,不够细腻,文章的前因后果过度自然一些就更好了,何况像陆雪琪这样清冷女神型女主堕落过程有多些心理描写就更好了,不过还是支持作者,希望作者再接再厉
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